My eportfolio is targeting all future Lewis students who decide to take Dr. Kyburz's class.
(This is a picture of her to the right. I googled her, she's almost as popular as Kanye!)
Although I was quiet most of the time in class. I never had the chance to express my gratitude towards Dr. Kyburz. She is such a sweet, patient, understanding professor. I have never had a writing professor like her throughout all my years in school. Especially because this is college level writing, she made it feel easy all while challenging us along the way. It wasn't stressful, she took it class by class to where she could see where we needed more time and where we needed more guidance. She made my least favorite subject less fearful and slowly helped me gain confidence within my own writing.
Some of the things I learned in her class not just in Writing in the Disciplines class, but also College Writing was knowing who my target was and how I should use different styles of writing to get my point across without using any biased opinions. She helped keep me in check with sticking to one perspective, such as writing my entire paper in first person or third person because I used to incorporate both... a lot!
One of the projects that helped me focus on these two techniques was the documentary project. It was a fun assignment having to watch a film from a list of choices she gave us and then just learning how to properly share the summary of the film to an audience without showing any bias, and expanding on details of what happen.
Another helpful assignment was the mock trial we did in class. It let us work in groups (that's how I met new people) and come up with our own interrogation and interview questions. It gave us a chance to let our creative sides come out. Take advantage, since most classes in college are lectures and can be very boring. My group was great to work with, and we ended up getting a confession from the person we interrogated which shocked us all! Our class was a quiet group but this project in particular is what helped us come out of our shells and forced us to speak and make new friends.
We read Report Writing for Law Enforcement, and it was pretty valuable information. I learned different types of reports which was a more in depth explanation than the second project we did on the types of police report presentations. The exercises she gave us were refreshers of things I had forgotten about that I learned in high school along with helpful tips on what we should expect to see and do for those of us going into law enforcement. There was a lot of little things that I didn't know and surprisingly, some of it was common sense. Go figure. Dr. Kyburz did a great job explaining and giving examples so we can engrave it in our heads for the near future especially the importance of the Oxford comma!
Reading the textbook helped my group incorporate all the new skills we learned with writing our final project, writing a police report. She let us be creative once again, but except this time, we knew she expected our narratives to be clear, concise, and full of details because that's what we have been talking about almost all semester.
Taking Writing in the Disciplines with Dr. Kyburz was a great experience. I felt comfortable enough to ask her questions as well as confident in myself to be able to complete her assignments. Other professors give me anxiety when I have to do their assignments.
Thank you Dr. Kyburz for all your wonderful stories and advise. As my final semester approaches I am glad I was able to take you twice during my journey here at Lewis. Your class is one of my favorites and I did learn a couple of things here and there that I hope will help me along my journey after Lewis. I think the fact that you are passionate about writing and teaching is why your students are able to focus and have fun while learning. That is a fantastic quality to have!
Friday, May 4, 2018
Tuesday, May 1, 2018
Ellie Nesler
Recently, on December 26,
2008, Ellie Nesler passed away from breast cancer. She is well known for
killing the child molester who sexually abused her son, William Nesler which
was 7 at the time. The man’s name was Daniel Driver a 35 year old a Christian
camp counselor. As Nesler was walking towards the witness stand she took out a
handgun and shot Driver 5 times in the back of the head and neck. This incident
happened in a Northern California courtroom in the Tuolumne County community of
Jamestown on April 2, 1993.
After
she shot Driver she didn’t resist arrest, she waited to be escorted out. She
was calm and had no reaction. Many people were supporting Nesler’s act, while
others were shocked and against it. She had people putting up bumper stickers
saying, “good shooting, Ellie.” She tried to plea reason of insanity but
instead was convicted of manslaughter instead of the original charge, being
murder. She went to prison for 3 years out of the 10 she was sentenced to for
good behavior. Shortly after she got out of prison she went back in July 2002
for trying to buy pseudoephedrine tablets from an undercover cop.
Friends
and family say Nesler is known to have a past with drugs. When she killed
Driver she was on Meth. Nesler had a hard childhood. She had an alcoholic father
who beat her mother as well as Ellie and her sisters. She was molested at the
age of three and sexually abused by three other men. As a child, she had
thoughts of suicide and after the shooting doctors revealed she had brief
reactive psychosis and PTSD. It’s no coincidence that knowing her son was
molested was enough to trigger her psychologically. Although she has a troubled
childhood, it still wasn’t enough to consider her mentally ill. Her crime was
premediated. She made sure there were no children in the courtroom as well as
do some research about a police officer she had befriended to make sure he
wouldn’t get in trouble for her bringing in the gun. The witnesses this day
were not searched for weapons this day. Ellie also waited to see if Driver was
going to plea guilty which he did not, and as he walked into the courtroom he
smirked at the family which caused even more reason to kill him according to
Nesler.
I can understand why
Ellie killed Driver for two reasons, the first because she is a mom and I would
think any mother would be furious and hurt to the point where they would want
revenge on the molester. Second, Ellie’s past must have triggered her to kill
Driver even knowing the consequences she was going to have to go through.
William Nesler is now serving 25 years to life in prison for the murder of
David Davis over an altercation of tools on the Nesler property. I feel like
having to be exploited about being molested as a kid and then knowing a lot of
people knew about Ellie, it took a toll on William. The absence of his mom
probably made him turn onto the path of crime. I think Ellie did what she felt
he should have done but at the same time instances like this cannot be allowed
because that’s why we have laws set in place. As corrupt and unfair as it may
be, this is why people can’t take the law into their own hands.
Wednesday, April 25, 2018
Police Report Reflection
I enjoyed watching videos and having to write police reports
as if we were the officers at the scene. It gave me practice as to what to
expect and what I should and shouldn’t do while writing a report. It was a
little overwhelming to make sure I wrote down every single little detail about
the scene and that’s with me being able to stop, pause and rewind the vide. In
real life, I think that’s a skill I’m going to need to work hard to possess.
Remembering what the victims and suspects say is key and I need to be able to
memorize or come up with some type of tactic in order to write that information
in my police report. I also need to memorize the different types of police reports.
What information goes in each. Overall, I think this project helped me realize
the main focus points I should be paying attention to.
Thursday, April 19, 2018
James Bulger
James Bulger was a 2 year old at the time he was kidnapped,
beat, tortured, sexually assaulted and killed. His killers are said to be the
youngest killers of the century throughout 250 years. These young killers were
10 year olds, Jon Venables and Robert Thompson. The killing took place in
England.
The two boys went to the
Strand Shopping Centre in Bootle, Merseyside on February 12, 1993. As soon as
James’ mother, Denise Fergus was distracted as she did some shopping at a
butchers shop, James was taken away and led by the two boys away from the
centre for approximately 2 1/2 miles.
Many people noticed James
being accompanied by Jon and Robert but when questioning them they answered
that James was a little brother they also answered that they were taking him to
a local police station because he was lost. Once they got to their final
destination, a railway line they began to beat torture and sexually assault
James. They poured blue modeling paint into his eyes, they stoned and clubbed
him with bricks before leaving him to get hit by a train.
James was found dead 2
days later. The boys were viewed as naughty boys around the neighborhood. When
it finally clicked to a neighbor that she remembered seeing the kids with blue
paint on their shirts, the police questioned and brought them in for an
interrogation. They confessed to the crime and had to do be tried in adult
court because of the outrage by many people. They ended up having to serve 8
years in prison. There is not much about the trial due to the fact that these
kids were minors.
In June 2011, the boys
were released with new identities but it wasn’t long until Venables had to
return back to jail for getting caught with child pornography. He admitted to
having a sickness. He had to get a second identity. As far as for Thompson, he
is living somewhere in England with his partner (who Robert was forced to tell
about the James case). Today, Robert has shown that he is gay. Due to having
new identities it is unknown who Robert and Jon are today.
Sadly I wasn’t able to
find out why the boys did what they did even though I’m not sure if the crime
itself explained the likes of the boys, the reason they are who they are. To
further explain, I’m not sure if because they got caught and sent to prison
missing out their childhood made them become gay (robert) and or become
interested in child pornography (Jon). Or if they already had these factors
before committing the crime. I think what they did was horrible. I was against
giving them second identities. People have a right to know and be angry and
they had it coming. I guess I’m being harsh because they were only kids when
they did this but I am 100% sure they had morals and they knew what they were
doing was wrong. I’m in favor of them being tried in an adult court. It’s a sad
story and it’s hard to not let your emotions take over while trying to figure
out the best consequence for these KIDS. For example, are the parents to blame?
I’m not sure if this could have been avoided, because even with Jon, while he
was in prison officials had no idea if his interest in child pornography. I
think that’s crazy!
Tuesday, April 10, 2018
Another kid dead, parents to blame.
I feel like anyone who is not financially or mentally stable should have a child.
Another child is dead and the people who killed them were his own parents.
How is that okay? How is that happening?
It really upsets me when I hear stories like this because I feel hopeless. It's like when will this end?
Kids safety is usually always 100% on the parents. Growing up I learned that no one will ever protect you, no one will ever love you more than your parents. It's sad, that these poor kids that have been killed by their parents didn't get to experience what life is about, they didn't get a second chance, they didn't deserve the neglect and abuse. They didn't deserve to die especially by their own parents!
What upsets me the most is that it happens to kids under the age of 10, kids who are vulnerable and weak and may not be able to defend themselves.
Stories like this is the reason I study criminal justice. I have a thirst to put these ignorant, selfish people in prison. I can't stand people who have kids that aren't fit to be parents. I know not everyone is raised the same way and what may right for some is wrong for others but there are boundaries and limits to everything including parenting.
http://abcnews.go.com/US/father-allegedly-killed-year-son-hit-repeatedly-put/story?id=54359674
Another child is dead and the people who killed them were his own parents.
How is that okay? How is that happening?
It really upsets me when I hear stories like this because I feel hopeless. It's like when will this end?
Kids safety is usually always 100% on the parents. Growing up I learned that no one will ever protect you, no one will ever love you more than your parents. It's sad, that these poor kids that have been killed by their parents didn't get to experience what life is about, they didn't get a second chance, they didn't deserve the neglect and abuse. They didn't deserve to die especially by their own parents!
What upsets me the most is that it happens to kids under the age of 10, kids who are vulnerable and weak and may not be able to defend themselves.
Stories like this is the reason I study criminal justice. I have a thirst to put these ignorant, selfish people in prison. I can't stand people who have kids that aren't fit to be parents. I know not everyone is raised the same way and what may right for some is wrong for others but there are boundaries and limits to everything including parenting.
http://abcnews.go.com/US/father-allegedly-killed-year-son-hit-repeatedly-put/story?id=54359674
Sunday, April 8, 2018
Society's safety Rant
As we read and hear about recent school shootings,
does it scare you? Does it make you think of your surroundings? About Lewis? I
feel like things have gotten out of control. Places we used to go and feel safe
are no longer comforting. Our guards must be put up at all times, we have
learned to distrust and instead we fear everyone who looks suspicious, or even
if they just dress differently. We seek to blame others and we demand justice
after the damage has been done. But is there really someone whose to blame? In
these times, who do we blame directly for the actions and mistakes of others?
There would be so many issues because we have people like police officers,
security guards, teachers, parents, the government, the president himself, the
kid who was bullied, the kid who’s mental illness was never given a second
opinion, or the women/men who never got the help they needed because society
shut them down. There are so many people living in this society and as much as
we want peace no one is 100% down to make a change. I think that’s always going
to be a problem as humans, we won’t speak up, we won’t help and we won’t take
action unless it affects us personally in any way. So now, when we have school
shootings, or shootings at the mall and or theatre, who do we blame? The
shooter? The parents/guardians, friends, family, teachers, the doctors? It’s a
sad cycle and I really do hope we come to a solution after so many innocent
lives have been lost already. Society praises safety but they put restrictions,
limitations and rules that prevent a change. Or even better, my favorite excuse
of them all, they do nothing.
It’s fair to say that I don’t feel safe anywhere else
except my home.
When I was little, I felt safer than I do now. In the
future, my kid’s safety will be one more thing I have to worry about and living
in fear sucks.
Rant over.
Monday, March 26, 2018
Trump's Border wall
He wants to built a wall to stop aliens from entering the
country and he wants Mexico’s government to pay for it. Being Hispanic myself,
I laugh at that because I know they’re not going to want to pay for it. Have
you ever heard someone’s name and cringe at the thought of the person? That’s
how I feel about Trump. Our criminal justice system isn’t perfect as it is and
now having someone like Trump as president, is scary.
Thursday, March 22, 2018
Reid Technique Audio
John Reid was a police officer who came up with idea, the Reid technique. It has become a technique many police departments use. However, it has it's problems. It can cause innocent people to be sent to prison for something they didn't do. The Reid technique involves observing a person being interrogated or interviewed to determine if they are guilty or not. Some things Police Officers look at is the body language, whether they keep playing with their hands, pretending to pick at imaginary lint off their clothes, shaking their legs... etc. The problem with this is, it causes anxiety to the point where people confess to something they know they did not do. Pressuring people for hours only makes them want to get out of the situation regardless if they did or did not commit the suspected crime. There have been examples of people who have been in prison and years later, it is later revealed that they were innocent. This then leads to the cops being under investigation for not doing their jobs right or the city being sued for all types of false accusations.
One thing that was mentioned was how television portrays investigations and interrogations. That is also false. In real life, it is boring. Television makes these situations very dramatic, go figure. More and more cases have appeared since the Reid Technique has been used and it has shown over and over again that there are obvious flaws to using this technique. This is why a new technique is starting to be used, it is called P.E.A.C.E which stands for preparation and planning, engage and explain, account, closure, and evaluate. This is well known in England because that is where it began.
This technique helps officers distinguish between a lie and the truth better than the Reid technique. It makes the person getting interviewed/interrogated say more details. This can cause someone to trip up their story. It gets harder to retell the scenario again and again with the same details. Personally, I feel like I would prefer using the PEACE technique because some people already know how to restrain themselves from looking anxious and that may throw off an officer, also because if it has been proven that the Reid technique has so many flaws than obviously there should be changes made.
Thursday, March 15, 2018
Silent Students Say No
Highschoolers are standing up and saying STOP. They are tired of losing peers, family, and friends. I am happy that people, highschoolers to be exact are speaking up and taking action. I think back to all those times my peers and I did not agree with things but did nothing to make a change because everyone was either scared or thought it wouldn't change anything. It's sad that it takes a couple of school shootings for students to try taking these situations in their own hands. It makes me wonder what the students from Lewis University would do if a shooting happened here, would we unite? Would we speak up and take action or would we do nothing?
https://www.nytimes.com/2018/03/14/us/school-walkout.html
https://www.nytimes.com/2018/03/14/us/school-walkout.html
Tuesday, March 6, 2018
Freewrite
I am currently on my break at work. Earlier, I decided to
walk around the store just to see what was happening outside of the office.
It’s a Tuesday, so it’s not as busy as it would be on a Saturday or Sunday,
thank God. I always swore I wouldn’t work in retail again and yet here I am,
except this time my position is different. The setting remains the same and the
people remain rude. I work at T.J Maxx in Countryside as Loss Prevention. I’m
that person just watching everyone making sure no one is stealing and when I
catch something, people are apprehended by my team or by the police. We are
always watching. Since that’s a core skill in my position to have, it’s quite
interesting what people will do for money. There are so many tactics I had
never thought of before getting this job. It can be a good day or a boring day
sometimes it all depends. People surprise me at the lengths they’ll go to in
order to get what they want.
Monday, February 26, 2018
Father in Little Village kills his 2 year old
http://abc7chicago.com/father-charged-with-murdering-2-year-old-son-denied-bond/3128491/#
So this happened last week, and when I heard about it I was so mad!
His reason as to why he killed his own kid is not acceptable. I get mad because of many crazy people there are today especially knowing how close this happened from my house. It makes you think about who your neighbors are. It makes me sad that the man knew right from wrong and continued to pin down his kid and it wasn't enough to hold him down, he had to involve a knife and he didn't think twice he just started to slit his throat. I don't get it, I will never understand how people have no conscious when committing such crimes.
Thursday, February 22, 2018
Narrative Project
I'm curious to know some of the reasons why people are studying criminal justice. I'm interested in knowing what has pushed them to want to be a part of such a corrupt system. I know for me personally, I am tired of hearing articles where police officers take advantage of their powers and get away with it. I want to be that percent of people who actually do their job with the intention of helping the community seeing as how bad it is now.
Monday, February 12, 2018
Man dies of dehydration because of correctional officers.
What do you think?
Who is to blame?
What does this make you think about the people working in these positions?
http://abcnews.go.com/US/milwaukee-jail-officials-charged-inmates-death-dehydration/story?id=53026125
Who is to blame?
What does this make you think about the people working in these positions?
http://abcnews.go.com/US/milwaukee-jail-officials-charged-inmates-death-dehydration/story?id=53026125
Wednesday, February 7, 2018
Writing is my weakness
Randomly typing up a blog because I need a break from writing and revising. Writing has always been my weakness so it can get stressful.
How I feel sometimes...
How I feel sometimes...
Thursday, February 1, 2018
13 kids held hostage by their own parents
I don't know how many of you have seen or heard of a recent issue that has surfaced on recent media, but parents of 13 kids held them hostage. The kids are ages 2-29 years old. If you haven't already seen this, I recommend it. I'm curious to know some of your thoughts and maybe what type of sentencing you would give the parents if you were the judge. Would the death penalty be an option? Why or why not?
I felt pissed off when I found out what they had done. My concern is for the kids and how and if especially the older kids (now adults) will and if they will be able to integrate with today's society. It's scary to know how many stupid, crazy people there are in this world. Some of their motives for doing the crimes they do are unnecessary and selfish. These kids did not deserve this torture and neglect.
https://youtu.be/HTahVg3ovt0
I felt pissed off when I found out what they had done. My concern is for the kids and how and if especially the older kids (now adults) will and if they will be able to integrate with today's society. It's scary to know how many stupid, crazy people there are in this world. Some of their motives for doing the crimes they do are unnecessary and selfish. These kids did not deserve this torture and neglect.
https://youtu.be/HTahVg3ovt0
Wednesday, January 24, 2018
Reflection
1. The scene that got to me the most would be the beginning of the documentary, because it made me feel sad that this is an everyday thing for people who not only live in Mexico but also for those of other countries. I felt like I could relate in the sense that I felt bad for them. The director did a good job in making his audience feel empathy right away. It caught my attention which is usually how someone wins over an audience. I could make a connection because I know people who’s families have been affected by the Cartel. I was also upset towards the end of the film where Dr. Mireles ended up cheating on his wife and he let his role in leadership get the best of him. I also disliked how his “followers” ended up turning on him and joined the police, I get why they did it but I feel like it contradicted everything they were initially fighting to stop.
2. There were a couple of things that surprised me, for starters, how Mathew interviewed people who were involved with the Cartel and how they openly spoke about why they became involved. Another thing that surprised me was the fact that people are so scared and yet tired of being pushed around that many men joined Jose MÃreles. I feel like it surprised me because now a days many people are afraid to stick up against someone who is causing society harm for example, many people feel like protesting or marching won’t change anything. It’s an idea as small as that, which leaves me surprised that Dr. Mireles was able to form such a big group. Lastly, I was surprised at how close Mathew was able to film some scenes. I feel he showed his audience some of the dangers we all talk about but don’t truly know in an extrodordinary film.
3. I don’t think I have any questions... I feel if anything the film helped show me the real dangers happening in other countries. It worries and the same time saddens me that there’s people out there with no remorse and prefer money over morals.
4. I would probably research more into the Cartel and how, why they started in the first place even though I think I might already know (for obvious reasons). I think I would like to also look into other big drug lords. Another topic I’m curious about but probably won’t find out would be the amount of people who work for the government but are secretly working for people like the Cartel. Lastly, if any, I’d watch interviews by people who have been involved with drug Lorda and tell their stories.
2. There were a couple of things that surprised me, for starters, how Mathew interviewed people who were involved with the Cartel and how they openly spoke about why they became involved. Another thing that surprised me was the fact that people are so scared and yet tired of being pushed around that many men joined Jose MÃreles. I feel like it surprised me because now a days many people are afraid to stick up against someone who is causing society harm for example, many people feel like protesting or marching won’t change anything. It’s an idea as small as that, which leaves me surprised that Dr. Mireles was able to form such a big group. Lastly, I was surprised at how close Mathew was able to film some scenes. I feel he showed his audience some of the dangers we all talk about but don’t truly know in an extrodordinary film.
3. I don’t think I have any questions... I feel if anything the film helped show me the real dangers happening in other countries. It worries and the same time saddens me that there’s people out there with no remorse and prefer money over morals.
4. I would probably research more into the Cartel and how, why they started in the first place even though I think I might already know (for obvious reasons). I think I would like to also look into other big drug lords. Another topic I’m curious about but probably won’t find out would be the amount of people who work for the government but are secretly working for people like the Cartel. Lastly, if any, I’d watch interviews by people who have been involved with drug Lorda and tell their stories.
My summary vs. The New York Times
After watching my documentary (Cartel Land) and writing my summary I read a review written by Manohla Dargis from The New York Times. In his review he went over mostly everything I included in my summary although the way he wrote it seemed much shorter and with a sort of informal style of writing. It wasn't improper writing but it felt like review was a friend explaining what he/she just saw. It felt biased because he mentioned his own feelings on how the director, Mathew Heinemann did such a great job and what parts he liked the most in the film. Compared to my summary I tried not including any feelings both good or bad. I feel like I tried to make my summary a formal as possible. You can feel the difference after reading both.
https://www.nytimes.com/2015/07/03/movies/review-in-cartel-land-documentary-vigilantes-wage-drug-wars.html
https://www.nytimes.com/2015/07/03/movies/review-in-cartel-land-documentary-vigilantes-wage-drug-wars.html
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