Friday, May 4, 2018

eportfolio

My eportfolio is targeting all future Lewis students who decide to take Dr. Kyburz's class.

(This is a picture of her to the right. I googled her, she's almost as popular as Kanye!)
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Although I was quiet most of the time in class. I never had the chance to express my gratitude towards Dr. Kyburz. She is such a sweet, patient, understanding professor. I have never had a writing professor like her throughout all my years in school. Especially because this is college level writing, she made it feel easy all while challenging us along the way. It wasn't stressful, she took it class by class to where she could see where we needed more time and where we needed more guidance. She made my least favorite subject less fearful and slowly helped me gain confidence within my own writing.

Some of the things I learned in her class not just in Writing in the Disciplines class, but also College Writing was knowing who my target was and how I should use different styles of writing to get my point across without using any biased opinions. She helped keep me in check with sticking to one perspective, such as writing my entire paper in first person or third person because I used to incorporate both... a lot!
One of the projects that helped me focus on these two techniques was the documentary project. It was a fun assignment having to watch a film from a list of choices she gave us and then just learning how to properly share the summary of the film to an audience without showing any bias, and expanding on details of what happen.

Another helpful assignment was the mock trial we did in class. It let us work in groups (that's how I met new people) and come up with our own interrogation and interview questions. It gave us a chance to let our creative sides come out. Take advantage, since most classes in college are lectures and can be very boring. My group was great to work with, and we ended up getting a confession from the person we interrogated which shocked us all! Our class was a quiet group but this project in particular is what helped us come out of our shells and forced us to speak and make new friends.

We read Report Writing for Law Enforcement, and it was pretty valuable information. I learned different types of reports which was a more in depth explanation than the second project we did on the types of police report presentations. The exercises she gave us were refreshers of things I had forgotten about that I learned in high school along with helpful tips on what we should expect to see and do for those of us going into law enforcement. There was a lot of little things that I didn't know and surprisingly, some of it was common sense. Go figure. Dr. Kyburz did a great job explaining and giving examples so we can engrave it in our heads for the near future especially the importance of the Oxford comma!

Reading the textbook helped my group incorporate all the new skills we learned with writing our final project, writing a police report. She let us be creative once again, but except this time, we knew she expected our narratives to be clear, concise, and full of details because that's what we have been talking about almost all semester.

Taking Writing in the Disciplines with Dr. Kyburz was a great experience. I felt comfortable enough to ask her questions as well as confident in myself to be able to complete her assignments. Other professors give me anxiety when I have to do their assignments.

Thank you Dr. Kyburz for all your wonderful stories and advise. As my final semester approaches I am glad I was able to take you twice during my journey here at Lewis. Your class is one of my favorites and I did learn a couple of things here and there that I hope will help me along my journey after Lewis. I think the fact that you are passionate about writing and teaching is why your students are able to focus and have fun while learning. That is a fantastic quality to have!

Tuesday, May 1, 2018

Ellie Nesler


Recently, on December 26, 2008, Ellie Nesler passed away from breast cancer. She is well known for killing the child molester who sexually abused her son, William Nesler which was 7 at the time. The man’s name was Daniel Driver a 35 year old a Christian camp counselor. As Nesler was walking towards the witness stand she took out a handgun and shot Driver 5 times in the back of the head and neck. This incident happened in a Northern California courtroom in the Tuolumne County community of Jamestown on April 2, 1993.
            After she shot Driver she didn’t resist arrest, she waited to be escorted out. She was calm and had no reaction. Many people were supporting Nesler’s act, while others were shocked and against it. She had people putting up bumper stickers saying, “good shooting, Ellie.” She tried to plea reason of insanity but instead was convicted of manslaughter instead of the original charge, being murder. She went to prison for 3 years out of the 10 she was sentenced to for good behavior. Shortly after she got out of prison she went back in July 2002 for trying to buy pseudoephedrine tablets from an undercover cop.
            Friends and family say Nesler is known to have a past with drugs. When she killed Driver she was on Meth. Nesler had a hard childhood. She had an alcoholic father who beat her mother as well as Ellie and her sisters. She was molested at the age of three and sexually abused by three other men. As a child, she had thoughts of suicide and after the shooting doctors revealed she had brief reactive psychosis and PTSD. It’s no coincidence that knowing her son was molested was enough to trigger her psychologically. Although she has a troubled childhood, it still wasn’t enough to consider her mentally ill. Her crime was premediated. She made sure there were no children in the courtroom as well as do some research about a police officer she had befriended to make sure he wouldn’t get in trouble for her bringing in the gun. The witnesses this day were not searched for weapons this day. Ellie also waited to see if Driver was going to plea guilty which he did not, and as he walked into the courtroom he smirked at the family which caused even more reason to kill him according to Nesler.
I can understand why Ellie killed Driver for two reasons, the first because she is a mom and I would think any mother would be furious and hurt to the point where they would want revenge on the molester. Second, Ellie’s past must have triggered her to kill Driver even knowing the consequences she was going to have to go through. William Nesler is now serving 25 years to life in prison for the murder of David Davis over an altercation of tools on the Nesler property. I feel like having to be exploited about being molested as a kid and then knowing a lot of people knew about Ellie, it took a toll on William. The absence of his mom probably made him turn onto the path of crime. I think Ellie did what she felt he should have done but at the same time instances like this cannot be allowed because that’s why we have laws set in place. As corrupt and unfair as it may be, this is why people can’t take the law into their own hands.